Tuesday, January 31, 2017

Do the Right Thing 

All Seniors: If you did not turn in your final submission with proper formatting and a completed application, it is due tomorrow for up to 95%.
Application Proofreading and Formatting Checklist

12A: Homework: Tonight, scroll through your snapchat stories and other social media. What do you notice about how women and men are represented? In your notebook, add to the list of traits we started today that are typically associated with femininity and masculinity as well as noting any outliers. Where are gender stereotypes challenged and in what context?

AP Language
Complete rationales for a minimum of three questions you got wrong on the AP practice test. For full credit, you need to use the language of the multiple choice strategies to explain why answers are wrong. Correct answers without explanation of incorrect answers will not be graded.

Language of the multiple choice strategies

Monday, January 30, 2017

Homework

Seniors -
Final final draft of Penguin Random House contest submission tomorrow along with your SIGNED application: 

Application 
Proofreading and Formatting Checklist . Bring one printed copy to class. 


AP Langugage
Complete your Literature Review Card for Frederick Douglass: Lit Review Card

Monday, January 23, 2017

Seniors -
Final draft of Penguin Random House contest submission due on Friday, Jan. 27. Bring one printed copy to class. Here is the checklist (scroll down to 11/12, or if you feel it is more fitting for where you are, use 9/10) : https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-ZVlIqmNvawd0dPVVNTVlRYVWF3Sk1oc3pRUjh2LXdqQVdZ/view?usp=sharing

**All mentor texts and some prompts are under the "texts and links" page of my blog.
**Contest details: http://foundation.penguinrandomhouse.com/learn-more/creativewriting/

We will fill out applications and prepare our submissions on Friday!

* I will accept first semester assignments until Wednesday at 5:00 pm.

AP Language: 
Bring The Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass to class on Friday. 


Thursday, January 19, 2017

-Seniors-
Come in tomorrow with four copies of your creative writing piece. Remember, it will be 20% off of your grade if you do not four copies printed by the beginning of class. Please note that my printer is not currently working, so you will need to print in the conference room in the morning (likely to be busy). You may also come to Ms. Murphy's office during advisory to print. As you work on it tonight, aim for cohesion and strengthening the narrative voice. Remember:


  • Small, specific detail
  • Authentic Dialogue
  • Varied sentences
  • Imagery
  • Names of places, people etc.
  • Repetition
TIP! Your mentor text is your best teacher. Use it to figure out the issues you are grappling with: how to transition to a new scene, how to include more specific details etc.

-AP Language -
1.) Finish Ch. 10 of F.D. and the bingo board I passed out in class today.
2.) By tonight at 10:00, respond to the prompt regarding Douglass's rebellion on the AP class blog: http://aplanguagepower.blogspot.com/
3.) Tomorrow during class, you will have a rhetorical analysis essay. If you receive a score of six or above, it will help your overall WRITING grade.

Some reminders:
High Level Essays
What is rhetorical analysis? 
Examples of High Scoring Rhetorical Analysis Essays 
Signal Verbs for discussing a writer's purpose
Marker Verbs for analysis 
How to write a thesis statement for a rhetorical analysis essay 
Topic Sentences with Transitional Language
4-3-2-1 Analysis 
Grading Criteria 
Essay Checklist 
America Needs Its Nerds - Octavia

Wednesday, January 18, 2017

January 18, 2017

Seniors -
Complete the assignment you assigned yourself in class today.

AP Language -

1.) Finish Ch. 10 and the bingo board I passed out in class today.
2.) By tomorrow night at 10:00, respond to the prompt regarding Douglass's rebellion on the AP class blog: http://aplanguagepower.blogspot.com/

Tuesday, January 17, 2017

Homework, Jan. 17

1. Tonight, write the concluding scene of your creative writing piece. Use the work you did today to make the ending satisfying for the reader. In order to use your mentor text, study the example you liked best by:
          -Identifying the transition from the climax to the conclusion
          -Try a similar transition in your own work before drafting the conclusion
          -Keep the following types of conclusions in mind: 
  • There is explicit or implicit character change
  • There is a shift in perspective
  • There is a type of resolution
  • The writer illuminates an issue
  • There is a moral or lesson

2. Share your document with Ms. Murphy: lmurphy.sof@gmail.com and me: jessica.candlin@gmail.com 


AP Language and Composition 

1. Tonight, reflect on Frederick Douglass so far. Which three scenes from the narrative are most pivotal and memorable? Why did you choose them?

2. Read the first few pages of chapter 10. How does Douglass's tone shift? Who is introduced and how?

Friday, January 13, 2017

Homework, 1/13

Seniors -

Scene two or a total of 700 words due on Tuesday. Get it down!


AP Language

Complete ch. 7 and read Ch. 8 or FD. Make sure you know the following info for an open note quiz on Tuesday:

-Characters names and their traits
-Events of both chapters
-Settings
-Choose FIVE paragraphs (1-2 from the rest of Ch. 7 and 3-4 from Ch. 8) and craft a question for a read-aloud like I did on Friday. Here are my examples:

Paragraph 1: Characterization: what is the most important aspect of Mrs. Auld in this paragraph and what is Douglass's tone towards her?
Paragraph 2: Describe how Douglass characterizes the effect of Slave holding on Mrs. Auld. Choose three pieces of evidence and rank them.
Paragraph 3: how does Douglass's tone change in thus paragraph. What is responsible for this change?
Paragraph 4: What is the effect of juxtaposing Mrs. Auld's with the poor boys who helped Douglass learn to read? 

Announcement: Tomorrow is a great day to make up any missed work!


Thursday, January 12, 2017

Tonight, write 350 words of your creative writing piece. If you are writing fiction or memoir, this should get you well into your first scene. If you are writing poetry, take a look at some of these examples below. Notice that although they are poems, they include a narrative arc: a beginning, middle and end, as well as character change.

Poems
Deer Hit 
Oranges

I finished my 350 words! You can read it here: Ms. C's Very Rough Draft, Scene 1

AP Language 

Head on over the class blog: http://aplanguagepower.blogspot.com/

Wednesday, January 11, 2017


Seniors
Tonight, find a mentor text in the genre you chose. A mentor text is an example of a literary work that you can use as inspiration. You can find the stories and poems we read in this unit so far in the "texts and links" tab of this blog as well as those from other units. Remember too that you have access to the award winners in the stations link from yesterday's homework. You may also find an example of a literary work in your chosen genre on your own.

AP Language 
Finish reading and viewing, if possible, Obama's farewell speech: http://www.latimes.com/politics/la-pol-obama-farewell-speech-transcript-20170110-story.html. As you read, track strategies: narratives, examples (what types), definitions, cause and effect, arguments etc. AND techniques: figurative language, juxtaposition, characterization (of Americans, America, his wife etc.), diction, tone...

Then, evaluate: how do his techniques and strategies help him achieve the purposes we discussed at the beginning of class? Which does he achieve? Which are more elusive? Ultimately, is this an effective speech for the occasion? Why and/or why not? We will discuss it at the beginning of class tomorrow.

Tuesday, January 10, 2017

Homework, Tuesday, January 10

Seniors: 
Tonight, complete the station work you started in class, being sure to have notes in your notebook to demonstrate your thinking. Here is the link (remember that some of the links take a few minutes to load): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pJ6bSolDURNbb6ZxueXhXZvnnOGr045tODSjQUCHDAo/edit?usp=sharing

Juniors: Tonight, use the following resource (Analyzing Characterization) to write the best darn paragraph of analysis that you can and POST it on the class blog by 10:00 pm at http://aplanguagepower.blogspot.com/. Please also remember to bring the paragraph from yesterday to class tomorrow.

Monday, January 9, 2017

Homework, Monday, Jan. 9

-Seniors -

Tonight, CHOOSE the topic and plot of the creative writing piece you're going to spend the next two weeks on. You need to know the following information by the time you come to class tomorrow.

-Who is the narrator of your creative writing piece? Age/gender/appearance etc.
-What is the external conflict?
-Who are the other characters in the piece? Age/gender/ethnicity/appearance etc.
-What is the setting of your piece? (Time period, location, social atmosphere etc)


AP Language 

Tonight, choose a show that you watch regularly and analyze one of the characters, using your notes and all the resources I provided today. Track STEAL. Then, based on the evidence in your STEAL chart, determine the characters most dominant traits. Finally, consider the function or purpose of the character on the show. Again, use your notes from class today, including the specific literary/rhetorical vocabulary I shared.

Thursday, January 5, 2017

Homework, Thursday, Jan. 4


Seniors 
Tonight, choose from the following options:

-Adapt your poem into a short story
-Write 1-2 more transformation/clothing poems
-Outline a transformation short story
-Start drafting short story about a transformation
-Write/draw a comic strip version of your story

Whatever you do, fill about two pages.

You can find the texts from today on the "Texts and Links" tab of this blog: "The Red Fox-Fur Coat" and "Rental Text"

Additionally, you can find the guiding questions and our brainstorm from class here: Click


AP Language: No homework. Below are some resources that will help you with your English exhibitions, and possibly your history exhibition too. 
Essay Checklist
Sample Intros, Intro Checklist, and Hooks
Some Sample Claims from our unit, including "Before" and "After:" Click Here 
Topic Sentences with Commentary from Ms. McGinnis: Click Here 
Topic Sentence Starters with Transitions: Click Here 
Character Analysis Questions: Click
A Sample Body Paragraph: Click Here
Sentence Stems for Analysis
How to embed quotations: Click Here
Step-by-Step Guide to Analysis: Click Here
Connections lesson #1
Conclusion Example




Wednesday, January 4, 2017

Homework, Jan. 4

-Seniors-

Today in class, you wrote in the second person and developed a kind of portrait of a person or role. Tonight, make that portrayal more specific by adding more detail and CONFLICT. What does the narrator want that he/she doesn't have? Make it as specific as possible and aim to write two pages in your notebook.

Here is my example: Click Here

And the mentor texts:
How to Date the Only White Boy in the Room: Contest Winner, 2015
"Girl" by Jamaica Kincaid
How to date a brown girl (black girl, white girl, or halfie)

AP Language

http://aplanguagepower.blogspot.com/
Blog post due tonight by 10:00 pm.

Tuesday, January 3, 2017

Homework, Monday, January 3

Seniors 

Read the 2015 Randomhouse Contest Winner Here: Click Here
AND
Choose one or two more winners to read -- poetry, memoir, fiction:Click Here (It takes a while to load. Then, scroll down). OR read two of the graphic novel submissions: Click Here (It takes even longer to load).

Then, reflect in your notebook:
1. How is this creative writing different from the narrative writing we did in the college essay unit?
2. What kinds of topics are addressed in the reading you did tonight and the excerpts we read today in class?
3.What moments and experiences from your own life do these stories make you think about?
4. What is your goal for this unit?

AP Language 

Read Hammond's Speech to Congress. Then, answer the following questions.

1.) What is his argument? Make sure to use a rhetorically precise verb.
2.) How does he respond to the New York Senator's claim that the "whole world has abolished slavery?"

3.
If your last name starts A-H: What allusions does Hammond include in his argument? What is their purpose? Make sure to include at least two.

If your last name starts I-M: Compare and contrast the descriptive diction that Hammond uses to compare various groups of people in the excerpt.

If your last name starts N-Z: How does Hammond justify slavery? What consequences does he fear if slavery is abolished?

4. Everyone: Paraphrase the few sentences below. Consider: What does Hammond mean by a "mud sill?" What is the purpose of the analogy of "building a house in the air?" If this is an example of figurative language, what does figurative language help speakers do?

Such a class you must have, or you would not have that other class which leads progress, civilization, and refinement. It constitutes the very mud-sill of society and of political government; and you might as well attempt to build a house in the air, as to build either the one or the other, except on this mud-sill."

Sunday, January 1, 2017

Winter Break - Homework/Extra Credit

Seniors - If you read a book or watched a film/documentary/mini-series over break, complete one of the assignments in the AP Language homework below for Reading extra-credit.

AP Language -
After you read the book you selected, choose one of the following options as a response. This assignment will count as a Reading Comprehension and Completion grade:

1.) Write a review that is no more than 450 words. Use the following resource as a guide: A Guide to Writing Reviews from The New York Times.

2.) Complete a literature review card on the book you read. Make sure that it is thorough: Literature Review Card

****BONUS! Anyone who POSTS their review on the class blog will receive extra credit towards their lowest reading grade on skedula.